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Re: It's my birthday... It's my birthday
Happy B-Day!!! :birthday: ~Angel
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: Just One Thing
Hey Nolan, long time no see, eh? Another lovely poem. It was powerful and yet like I said to someone before, it wasn't heavy. It just flowed well to the ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: Just friends
Tis another great poem Kris!!! You have a way of getting a message across without making into thick and calorie filled. So now when I read poetry, my mind isn't ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: Maharaj The Magician [edited]
Hey Jig!! You posted! When I seen this I couldn't wait to read this, so instead of doing my work in school I secretly read this and loved every bit, ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: Die, Die For Me (I)
Hey Esme, I thought I'd take a peak and I am not disappointed but just...lost. It was just too short for me to critique and my brain can't function because ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: I'll Ruin Her
Hey Olivia! First off, I don't want to make this one of those complimentary reviews because this is a true story and if it applies to you, then I am ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: And the Sun Sets in the West
Mr. Ellington's words were abrupt and sorrow inducing. Though he was a friend of her father's, he was also a man of sincerity. His thick brown hair was pulled back ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: FreakForChrist
Yeah Wise, this had to be Nate's doing. He's always up to something. When I saw the headline and clicked on it I couldn't believe that someone only visited YWS ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: My Publisher Dropped Me Today...
Don't think this was the right place to post this but that sucks. Are you sure they dropped you because of your age? If they did then you shouldn't just ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 3 (Edited)
Hey KJ!!! I liked this chapter. It described High School well and yet it also showed Rebecca's life more clearly. Now the reader knows exactly what she goes through and ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Preface
Wow another great story Ash. I can tell because there was a good last sentence, and though I hate cliffhangers I'll be sure to stay tuned in for more. Please ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: Young Love
Hello there! Well I can't believe no one reviewed this yet. This was a great example of unexpected. I really did like this story but in cases like this, you ...
Sep 30, 2008 -
Re: A Heart So White
ello Cal! Felt enchanted today so I decided to come round to you. Ah this was a great story. It was kinda morbid at first but it ended up being ...
Sep 30, 2008 -
Re: Favourite and Least Favourite Words!
Favorite: Incandescent Least Favorite: adorn ~Angel
Sep 30, 2008 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 2
~~Edited~~ ~Angel
Sep 30, 2008